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              I wanted to tell you,
             But earth kept me away.
          I wanted to say it out loud,
       But wind blew my words away.
                I wanted to write it,
               But pages flew away.
     I asked God why he is doing this,
                         He said,
        “because your love is not true.
     If it is true, then prove it, will you?”

            So I took out my heart.
     etched the message with a knife,
and said to God, “Give it to her, before I die.”

      “Take this heart my dear,
       and see your name inside it,
     Know that, I was born to love you,
           but died to prove it.”

I call this true love.
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JackieRB2007 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
that is painful to read but so true and amazing. Love is that hard so often...
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Valiant-Devil Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
Yea... Love can be painful.

I used to writes romantic poetry when I liked a girl. Now when I look at my poems I don't believe I can ever write such things.
Love makes you a poet lol
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JackieRB2007 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
that it does. But I honestly had a boyfriend once and it seemed all I could write was sad things. Funny really to think about that but they were amazing. :)
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Valiant-Devil Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
lol that's funny!

I guess deep down inside you, your heart was sad being with him.
But who am I to know...

It's cool that they were amazing :)
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JackieRB2007 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
actually most of what's on my account is from then... So I guess you would know. LOL
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Valiant-Devil Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
lol!

Well those are certainly some amazing poems ;)
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JackieRB2007 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
well thank you very much.
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DarkAssassin710 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008
Omg, painfully but beautiful and touching... :cries:
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Valiant-Devil Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008
I am glad that you liked it... But it's even more painful than this, when your love doesn't love you... It's the most painful..
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DarkAssassin710 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008
Sure... Yea, it's painfully... When love is born, legend is made... You have beautiful poetry...
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Valiant-Devil Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2008
:hug:
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halpal101 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008
that sound a little like my poem "your name is away"
strange
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Valiant-Devil Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
I would rather say it's very rare!
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halpal101 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2008
wow thats rough
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Valiant-Devil Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008
haha... maybe because as someone has said that love comes to a point where it's hard to distinguish the line between love and insanity.!

But sure God won't ever doubt a true lover's love...:-)
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halpal101 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008
true...:)
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meredith-de-monstre Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2008
OUch!
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Valiant-Devil Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008
That maybe painful, but life seems a very tiny thing when you really love someone from your :heart:
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meredith-de-monstre Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008
I suppose it would. I have never felt such things, but it is very great to think that somebody may.
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